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Sycophantic Greeting to an Exceptional Individual (¶Ù¾î³­ »ç¶÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ¾ÆºÎ ÆíÁö)

1486
sycophantic greeting to an exceptional individual
date written:
dear mr./ miss :
this is to let you know that as your manager, i am so elated for the exceptional thing that you have accomplished during our grand open house two weeks ago.i was so happy that seven of your clients that you have offered to buy, five of them decided to buy a house and lot in cash.that rarely happens in our company.congratulations for that!
but thats not all.the other customers liked to buy the house on installment terms while the others are planning to purchase in several months to come.in other words, we did not receive an impression that they are ignoring your offer.
keep up the good job and i hope you will continue to have that positive momentum.i also hope that others would follow your path on how to be good in sales.
cordially,
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Obsequious Salute to the Most Admired Employee (°¡Àå Á¸°æ¹Þ´Â Á÷¿ø¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ¾ÆºÎ Àλ繮)

1484
obsequious salute to the most admired employee
date written:
mr./ miss :
i have to say that you have made all of us in the company proud about our work.our mission has been recognized by the public when you spoke about the welfare of the children under abuse and mistreatment.with the words you had uttered, many felt that we are important in the society.
with your speech, we were able to raise funds more than we expected.also, people donated things like clothes, bed linens and other basic needs of the children.a well-known company also gave us educational scholarships for all of them too.
i hope that you will continue to speak on our behalf so that we will be able to give quality life to these underprivileged children.
yours truly,
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Letter of Express Happiness over Heroic Deed (¿ë°¨ÇÑ Çൿ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÃàÇÏ)

1482
letter of express happiness over heroic deed
date given:
to my dearest nephew :
i have heard the news from your mother that recently you have done such a heroic deed that any parent or relative should be pleased of.despite your job being considered as life-threatening, you did not have hesitations to save people who are in great danger.i just know from the start that you will end up a very dedicated and responsible individual.
even in the newspapers, your name is in the front page.i heard that you rescued three people in the hostage scenario.you negotiated with the assailants alone and no violence has resulted when you took charge of the incident.also, i am thankful that you and the victims were safe.
i cannot stop myself from telling people i know how delighted i am of you.keep on doing good to people.
with much happiness,
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Sales Prospects (ÆǸŠ¿¹»ó ÃßÀ̹®)

1480
sales prospects
(date)
(company name & address)
dear mr./ms.,
congratulations! the sales figure from last month just got to my attention and i must say that i am quite impressed with your work.
to help you achieve your goal this month, i am enclosing the list of inquiries we have received from your region regarding the new line of products.literature has been mailed with your name to each interested company.make a follow up sales call to them as soon as possible.these leads will surely compliment your goal this month.if i may be of any help, please give a call.
sincerely,
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Excellent Job (ÈǸ¢ÇÑ ¾÷¹«¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÃàÇϹ®)

1478
excellent job
date
dear
congratulations! you are now a product manager.your promotion is well-deserved.this is high time for me to tell you that you make the company proud.your painstaking efforts have finally paid off.i am confident that you will even be more productive with your new position.
keep in mind that we shall be working hand in hand with you in this endeavor.
more power and more productive years to come!
truly yours
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